Her Story Told:And other poems by Charley

  
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Published Nov 21, 2013 Popular

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great.......lovely....the poem has a mark of genuine artist's mind.
Charley May 24, 2014 at 20:44 Thank you :-)
May 23, 2014 at 08:35
unusual and very good. :D
Charley March 20, 2014 at 14:04 Thank you :)
March 20, 2014 at 05:59
Nice book. It's short and cool. The first verse, the one which donates the title to the book, is excellent. Along the first eight lines, you wrote a really phonal poetry, it has a rhythm to be read loudly. Then, you break this rhythm on two lines. It was cool. Well, I would like to see other rhythm on the line twelve, but even though, I enjoyed, it's your option, not mine. So, this portion is my favorite of the entire book: "For when she screamed: Leave me alone, / All I heard, /Was that spine chilling groan, / His blood was spilled". The opposition between "Love X Pain" in many poems are, also, really sweet. I enjoyed "Spider", you included many nice rhymes on it.
Charley November 29, 2013 at 12:22 Thank you for your feedback, I'm glad you enjoyed it them :)
November 28, 2013 at 18:35
Very good. Love your poems
Joseph Henri Bregeiro November 21, 2013 at 20:34 Nice poems!!!
Charley November 21, 2013 at 20:37 Thank you
November 21, 2013 at 18:31
Very good. Love your poems
November 21, 2013 at 18:31
Very good
November 21, 2013 at 18:31
Hi Charley, welcome :-) It would be great if you filled in the description box too. xo
Breno Spadotto November 21, 2013 at 16:55 Yeap... great idea.
Charley November 21, 2013 at 17:45 Thank you and ok :)
November 21, 2013 at 16:55
Very nice!!
November 21, 2013 at 16:52