Little Lady by athenalentz

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Published Jun 13, 2014 Popular

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I have finished chapter 9 and have found myself lost in this story without periods :) Excellent job keeping the story going forwards! I like the character you have been developing in this book. it's really neat! I like your spin on the Holes movie ^.^
athenalentz July 10, 2014 at 16:46 I love my twist xD makes it half original and half new!
June 19, 2014 at 23:42
I've read 14 pages to this story, and boy, I have one suggestion: Please add some period marks to some of your sentences. Otherwise it feels like you are doing this in the first movie, instead of Caveman you are using this girl to replace Caveman. The writing is smooth and flow, going along quite well, but you got the talent to continue writing ^.^ I wish ya the best of luck writing this Holes Fan Fiction! :D
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TFALokiwriter June 18, 2014 at 21:59 A Original Character, ah, I see ^>^ How many chapters do ya plan to have?
athenalentz June 18, 2014 at 22:04 the whole movie excep Camp Green Lake's past scenes, and my own little twists, and yes I did mean that sorry I just woke up from a nap xD
athenalentz June 18, 2014 at 22:04 except*
June 18, 2014 at 20:30