Must try harder by Kam Carr

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Published Jan 23, 2015 Popular

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nice start. like what i have read so far. have to disagree on the swearing as it enhances the character you are trying to portray. something to remember is not everybody will like your style of writing and to me judging from other books i have read your trying a different approach just use the other characters in your book to soften his.
February 8, 2015 at 23:56
I like it so far but the swearing is killing me Kam. My ears!!!! and eyes too. lol
Kam Carr January 24, 2015 at 10:20 I know its a little much, but it will calm down. Kyle is very arrogant and he thinks its clever to think that way.
keisha williams January 29, 2015 at 18:02 good to hear.
January 23, 2015 at 13:35