Reminiscing by Terra-Leigh Erris

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I found the ending a little rushed. It started very smoothly, and the description was quite vivid, the ending could have been a tad bit narrative you know. :) A good one Terra.
Terra-Leigh Erris October 11, 2016 at 09:05 Thanks for the feedback :)
October 21, 2014 at 06:11
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August 20, 2016 at 22:01
I enjoyed this. Loved your imagery and I think lavender scented soap is pretty unique. =)
Terra-Leigh Erris April 23, 2014 at 00:02 Thanks so much :) I'm glad you enjoyed reading it
April 21, 2014 at 18:26
I enjoyed this. Loved your imagery and I think lavender scented soap is pretty unique. =)
April 21, 2014 at 18:26
Please sum1 help me wid dis app cuz m new n i really m not gettin how to use it
November 27, 2013 at 18:40
Nice
Terra-Leigh Erris October 29, 2013 at 22:08 Thanks :)
October 29, 2013 at 16:13
This book is more or less a life's storyline;i was so glued to it,reading word by word until i finished all the pages,its also short. Caitlin,you can write a very good bigger book;really enjoyed it& it inspired me to write something similar which i have been putting on hold. Thank you for sharing.
Terra-Leigh Erris October 26, 2013 at 11:40 Thank you so much :) I am working on a longer one that will HOPEFULLY (if I'm REALLY lucky and do everything right) will turn into a book one day called "Ambrosine" :)
October 25, 2013 at 10:00
It's pretty puerile and there's nothing predictably strange about the dream she wished to live in reality.The reminiscence could have been written in the format of a whodunit to be fascinating and finessed.
Terra-Leigh Erris October 26, 2013 at 11:38 Thanks :) I didn't think of writing it like that, but it's a pretty good idea
October 25, 2013 at 10:26
very short and wonderful
Terra-Leigh Erris October 26, 2013 at 11:37 Thanks heaps :)
October 25, 2013 at 13:41
a nice and interesting
Terra-Leigh Erris October 26, 2013 at 11:37 Thank you :)
October 25, 2013 at 14:16
a very nice twist to the story in the end. well written
Terra-Leigh Erris October 26, 2013 at 11:37 Thanks :)
October 26, 2013 at 09:50
It is nice
October 24, 2013 at 18:25
Hey, Caitlin, I just read your short story and, well, I really enjoyed it. I would like to write about some points that might be interesting for you and for new readers. "Reminiscing" has an impacting first paragraph, and a strong first line. Few days ago I was reading an article in "The Atlantic" exactly about first lines, I will write the link below if you are interested. The development of the story is quite fast, suddenly the main character is married, has children, grandchildren and the plot become a little bit foreseeable, a perfect love story is happening, again. This sensation of "oh, shit, I nice beginning is becoming other fucking sweet story, no, please, no" actually helps to the outbreak of other sensation, delivered by the end that you choose. Because, then - and that's my real congratulation for you - you change the end dramatically, and, following the structure of the story, quickly. I loved the end. And your bloody perspective remembered me other author, as Caitlin and Australian as you, named Caitlin Mailing. She is poet and is also a kind of bloody in many poem, I will write the link of an interview that we made with her here, in Widbook. Congratulations! The Atlantic: (http://m.theatlantic.com/entertainment/archive/2013/07/this-did-something-powerful-to-me-authors-favorite-first-lines-of-books/278085/ ) Interview: http://blog.widbook.com/this-is-not-a-sunny-poem-interview-caitlin-maling/
Terra-Leigh Erris September 27, 2013 at 06:19 Thanks :)
September 26, 2013 at 17:01