The Child Who Loved Emily Dickinson, and Other Short Stories by Bernard Glassman (bg)

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After being in relationship with Wilson for seven years,he broke up with me, I did everything possible to bring him back but all was in vain, I wanted him back so much because of the love I have for him, I begged him with everything, I made promises but he refused. I explained my problem to someone online and she suggested that I should contact a spell caster that could help me cast a spell to bring him back but I am the type that don't believed in spell, I had no choice than to try it, I meant a spell caster called Dr Zuma zuk and I email him, and he told me there was no problem that everything will be okay before three days, that my ex will return to me before three days, he cast the spell and surprisingly in the second day, it was around 4pm. My ex called me, I was so surprised, I answered the call and all he said was that he was so sorry for everything that happened, that he wanted me to return to him, that he loves me so much. I was so happy and went to him, that was how we started living together happily again. Since then, I have made promise that anybody I know that have a relationship problem, I would be of help to such person by referring him or her to the only real and powerful spell caster who helped me with my own problem and who is different from all the fake ones out there. Anybody could need the help of the spell caster, his email: spiritualherbalisthealing@gmail.com or call him +2348164728160 you can email him if you need his assistance in your relationship or anything. CONTACT HIM NOW FOR SOLUTION TO ALL YOUR PROBLEMS
October 10, 2018 at 07:24
Powerful opening really drew me in. Great dialogue, especially from Penelope. "It's getting crowded." is an excellent line. To me, the transition into the sex stuff was a little abrupt, considering it followed a train of thought sprung by the narrator's daughter. It also goes on a bit too long. And I couldn't help but think: of all things, their sex life is the most memorable thing about his dead wife? Kinda weird. I'd take out what you said on the voicemail (maybe that's nit-picky, but just trying to be honest). Also, slow down a bit. I feel like you're pushing the story forward instead of letting the details of Gloria's death simmer in the reader's mind. From remembering her passing to mishearing (or not) Penelope's use of "Jack" to Halloween to looking for Emily Dickinson images, there seems to be too much plot movement in the first 10 or so pages.
Bernard Glassman (bg) June 24, 2013 at 20:57 Michael, I deeply appreciate your comments and will make revisions based on them. I'd reply at greater length, but the design of this text field precludes its use. Also, take a look, if you like at http://goo.gl/kbhUJ and, if you think it's worth it, give me your equally perceptive and useful observations. Thank you!
May 31, 2013 at 17:24
Bernard, I read your book and the reading attracted me a lot. In some parts, I got lost, perhaps by the abrupt change in the narrative. At the end of the short stories I could see that there was meaning there. Was that proposital? Oh ... I also liked the way you put feelings as characters. ;)
March 26, 2013 at 09:39
Nice to have a book like this on Widbook, Bernard. I'm beginning my reading right now.
March 7, 2013 at 05:16