The Passing of The Eye:(The Struggle Against the Strongest Typhoon that Hit the Philippine Islands) by Nikkah Jacobi

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Published Nov 20, 2013 Popular

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Hi Nikkah, is this short really finished?
Nikkah Jacobi February 11, 2014 at 01:31 yes, this is finished... i want the readers to think what happened in the end of the story...
February 10, 2014 at 17:42
Coll story. Nice descriptions of the storm and the tsunami, short, but intense descriptions. I felt, in some point, that the descriptions were exaggerated, I would like to know more about the characters, but new events were running along the text. Suddenly, I realize that this sensation was, in fact, a cool writing effect, it was exactly what was moving me forward on the reading. I think Rita is a good character, she donates an erratic sense of responsibility. I need to point that I enjoyed the structure too, the small chapters, divided by time, make the reading easier. Congratulations.
Nikkah Jacobi November 22, 2013 at 02:17 Hi! Thank you for praising my writing style,it's a technique I got from watching television series to keep the reader glued to the story. Forgive me if the descriptions seems to be exaggerated, the storm (Typhoon Haiyan) itself was an exaggerated one, reaching the highest sustained winds to 315 km/h (195 mph) prompting the sea waves to invade the city like a tsunami. Again, thank you very much! :)
November 22, 2013 at 01:01