The Missing Princess by Sam Amell

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Published Jan 10, 2016 Popular

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Just read the second chapter :) It was very interesting. Can't believe the MC's mom would do this to her 😂 (then again the MC does need some serious counselling) I like your writing style. It shows the MC's own voice and is really funny. The only thing that bothers me is the constant use of the words "I smirked or I shrugged". It's like you're trying too hard to make Daniella seem like a badass. You don't need to use these verbs so many times. Try using different actions. In some cases you don't even need to use anything at all. The dialogues will speak for themselves. Anyway, keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter! 😄
July 20, 2016 at 07:20
I liked the first chapter! The MC really does have a pretty bad personality ●īšâ— But that makes her seem more real, I guess. 😁 Hoping to see more development from her.
Sam Amell January 14, 2016 at 04:39 Thanks so much for reading the chapter. I have another chapter that I will be uploading soon so if you have any suggestion please tell me!!!
January 13, 2016 at 06:16